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Thursday, April 28, 2005
Episod 13

Assalamualaikum warahmatullah…

Jeng jeng jeng…

Sebenarnye, exam+writer’s bloc+takut entry tak up to expectation (I’m bad with failures you see, it sends me into cardiac arrest) kinda halted this episode.

*Hadiah angkat perisai Trojan kut-kut nak elak orang baling telur tembelang*.

Fir ~ did you realize you just rhymed? =p

Kak Alzun & Ieja ~ told you you’re going to luku Danial. =D

Honeyza ~ snow lady nak turun gurun. Hehhe…

Ahada ~ keep on visiting, aight? =)

Aie ~ congratulations for not missing the two-liner! Muehhehhe… Saja je letak, ko je yang piker lebey-lebey. ;)

Dueng ~ aiseh brader, me no master laa bab-bab 18sx nih. [Nak kene buat declaration ke yg Danial & Balqis is still clean off the track? Tu ler pasal, letak lagi 2-liner. Dah ala-ala kelas literature plakk buat sessi free interpretation. *grins*]

Laling Azaren ~ thank you for counteracting n having heaps of trust in me. Cayang laling. ;)

 

Sangap… Sangap…

 

Esok pagi Balqis akan berangkat bersama-sama Jasmin ke Johannesburg, Afrika Selatan. Dari sana, mereka akan mengambil connecting flight ke Maputo, ibu Negara Mozambique.

 

Danial terasa baru semalam mereka pertama kali berkongsi gelak-tawa.

 

Dia memerhati Balqis yang leka melipat helaian-helaian pakaian, sambil bersila di hujung katil. Sebuah luggage Polo besar berwarna biru tua ternganga di hadapannya. Seluar cargo, slacks, kemeja lengan panjang, baju Morocco, beberapa jubah dan baju kurung disusun bertindih-tindih di dalam beg. Diselitkan juga novel-novel Tom Clancy dan Dan Brown.

 

“You ni pack gaya nak pindah terus je?” soal Danial, suaranya kecil.

 

Balqis tersentak. Lamunannya mati. Dia mengangkat kepala untuk melihat wajah Danial di muka pintu. “Kalau I pindah terus konfem you joli katak, ek?” ujar Balqis, tersenyum.

 

Danial mengambil tempat di sebelah Balqis di atas lantai. Dia mencapai sehelai tudung berwarna mauve lalu dilipatnya. “Just watch. I would get to Maputo faster than you could say ‘katak’,” balas Danial.

 

Balqis tersengih.

 

Foodstock I dah pack dah. Sealed and labeled dah pun kotak tu. Serunding, keropok, ikan kering yang orang bagi semua I sumbat sekali,” terang Danial. “Nak buat kenduri pulut ikan kering kat Maputo tu pun lepas agaknya.”

 

“Maggi Tomyam?”

 

Danial senyum, menggeleng-gelengkan kepala. “The first I sumbat dalam kotak tu. No worries.”

 

“Thanks,” balas Balqis, turut tersenyum. Tudungnya kini bertukar tangan. “Don’t know what I would do without you,” tuturnya ikhlas.

 

The offer nak teman you sampai Johannesburg tu still stands, for your information.”

 

“I’d rather buat scene Hindustan kat KLIA. Support local film industry.” Balqis sengih.

 

“I’m going to miss all your smartass comments.”

 

“And I’m going to miss making fun of you…”

 

Danial tersenyum. “Ha-ha. Too bad opah dah ke Kent. Mama dengan Papa pun scheduled umrah…”

 

Balqis mengangguk-angguk perlahan. Dia mencapai hand luggage di tepi katil. Tafsir, beberapa buah kitab agama dan sejadah kecil disumbatkan ke dalam. Cheese balls untuk transit di Johannesburg, air mineral, toiletries, MP3 player. Passport, tiket, traveller’s cheques, duit tunai berbentuk dollar dan euro diselitkan ke dalam pouch.

 

“Hmm … Organiser.” Balqis bingkas bangun untuk mengambil beg tangan yang dibawa ke farewell dinner yang dianjurkan SJMC semalam. Tidak menang tangan dia dan Danial membawa pulang ole-ole, sehinggakan beg tangannya hanya dicampak di tepi tangga semalam.

 

“Ke mana?” soal Danial yang leka melipat kain batik pula.

 

“Ambil my handbag. Organiser I dalam tu. Nak masuk dalam beg siap-siap.”

 

“Hang on. I ambilkan.”

 

Danial menuruni anak tangga satu-persatu. Kelihatan beg tangan TopShop Balqis yang tergantung di railing tangga. Pantas dicapai. Tangga dinaiki semula. Kemudian sepucuk surat berwarna biru gugur dari poket tepi beg itu. Danial tunduk untuk mengutipnya.

 

Breathtaking Balqis..

 

Kening Danial terjungkit. Terasa lain macam melihat kata-kata pujian untuk isterinya yang bukan dicoret oleh dirinya sendiri. Surat di tangan direnung. Kemudian pandangan beralih ke muka pintu bilik Balqis yang ternganga.

 

Well, curiosity does kill the cat, ain’t it?

 

Flip sampul surat diselak. Sehelai stationary berwarna putih bergaris emas di dalamnya. Danial menarik nafas perlahan. Lipatan surat dibuka.

 

Balqis Amani,

It’s agonizing to see such a beautiful creature but knowing she is not mine.

I’ll be waiting for the next six months to pass quickly.

I’ll be waiting for you.

And I’ll be waiting for us to become real.

 

Hamzah.

 

 

“Pick up… Pick up…” gumam Balqis. Jam di dinding sudah berbunyi dan berdenting 12 kali. Masuk kali ini, sudah 23 kali Balqis menghubungi nombor yang sama. Namun, untuk kali ke-23 jugalah, makcik Celcom yang menjawab.

 

Telefon bimbitnya melagukan lagu tema ‘The Addams Family’. Bingkas dicapai. Farrah.

 

“Kak Qis, I’ve tried everybody. Semua cakap takde. Akak dah call Haris?” suara Farrah kalut.

 

Balqis menghela nafas. Kepalanya diteleku. “Dah…” ujar Balqis pendek. “Chu, akak blank dah ni…”

 

“I’m coming over.”

 

Panggilan dimatikan. Balqis terus duduk berteleku di tepi meja telefon. Gelisah mengingatkan Danial yang keluar rumah secara tiba-tiba sejak petang tadi. Haris, Taufik, David, Richard dan kenalan-kenalan rapat Danial yang lain sudah dihubungi. Namun hampa.

 

Nombor Fisha merenungnya dari notepad. Wajarkah dia mendail nombor itu?

 

Sekali lagi telefon bimbitnya berbunyi. Mesej. Danial.

 

‘I can’t play my way with words. I can’t fight the crowd when I’m unsure of how you feel towards us. Maafkan I, Balqis. I’m a coward.’

 

 

“Kak Qis, jom. Nanti tertinggal flight,” pujuk Farrah perlahan. Hand luggage Balqis di tepi pintu dijinjingnya.

 

Balqis mengangguk perlahan. “Kejap.” Stetoskop di tangan diletakkan perlahan di atas meja jepun, di sebelah kotak baldu berwarna hitam. May the beats of your heart leads you back to me. Ameen..


Posted at 10:09 pm by sesucicinta

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July 1, 2009   12:48 PM PDT
 
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June 26, 2009   11:51 AM PDT
 
kuat kan azam
malaysia web design
June 23, 2009   04:27 PM PDT
 
exam pun takut
web design
June 3, 2009   11:15 AM PDT
 
semoga berjaya
syakirah
September 27, 2006   08:58 PM PDT
 
hai sume,i dh baca novel ni skit tp blum abis lagi.best gilak...sape nk kenal i,bleh call dis no 0148078424
WAWA
July 13, 2005   08:05 PM PDT
 
BEST BANGAT CERITA NI......TAK RUGI KALO BACA.....
fir
April 30, 2005   01:07 AM PDT
 
typo

*lengthy
fir
April 30, 2005   01:04 AM PDT
 
Hadiah, yeah, it sounded like a rhyme :)

But, it's true that I just woke up than, and immediately baca your novel, and terus smiling from ear to ear =) The sentences simply popped up.... off the top of my head. And taaddaaa... there it was :D

Anyway, I am mesmerized by your writing. It never ceases to amaze me :) I think I love the dialogue part. It sounds so natural :)

Not only that, it has also affected me in real life. I recently told my bf, I wanna be a good cook later, boleh masak macam-macam like Balqis did. Therefore, I told him I'll start learning to cook this weekend :)

It's Friday already. And the weather is beautiful. But, if you don't chill out tonite, perhaps boleh write a new entry. *wink*

p/s:sorry for the length explaination + compliment + suggestion + whatever-crap-it-is.
ieja
April 29, 2005   08:34 PM PDT
 
uiks..takut plak sumer orang emo..hihihi
hamzah dah blacklisted nampaknya.
makin naik laa saham danial pasnih :D
dhiya
April 29, 2005   07:27 PM PDT
 
jom jaja... meh kita kasi pelempang kat si hamzah...

well done hadiah! Great job here... semuanya meninggalkan kesan... sebab tu lah ur readers a bit emo... including me! ;)
azaren
April 29, 2005   03:46 PM PDT
 
wah.. laling.. your readers getting emo seihhh. Aie siap bagi commentary lagi.. huu.. meh meh.. nak tambah syahdu lagi haha!

_Wherever You Will Go_

So lately, I've been wonderin
Who will be there to take my place
When I'm gone, you'll need love
To light the shadows on your face
If a great wave should fall
It would fall upon us all
And between the sand and stone
Could you make it on your own

[Chorus:]
If I could, then I would
I'll go wherever you will go
Way up high or down low
I'll go wherever you will go

And maybe, I'll find out
The way to make it back someday
To watch you, to guide you
Through the darkest of your days
If a great wave should fall
It would fall upon us all
Well I hope there's someone out there
Who can bring me back to you

[Chorus]

Runaway with my heart
Runaway with my hope
Runaway with my love

I know now, just quite how
My life and love might still go on
In your heart and your mind
I'll stay with you for all of time

[Chorus]

If I could turn back time
I'll go wherever you will go
If I could make you mine
I'll go wherever you will go

jaja
April 29, 2005   01:50 PM PDT
 
dhiya..jom kiter pelempang hamzah ramai2...muka cute tp eiii geramnyer saya...mmg nak hadiahkan jek 5 jari nih..mana hamzah tuh mane2...meh sini...
jaja
April 29, 2005   01:50 PM PDT
 
dhiya..jom kiter pelempang hamzah ramai2...muka cute tp eiii geramnyer saya...mmg nak hadiahkan jek 5 jari nih..mana hamzah tuh mane2...meh sini...
aielemocnian
April 29, 2005   01:43 PM PDT
 
hahaha!!! lek laa... xyah nk hemo pasal hamzah...

walaupun agak ngok ngek gak laa still mengharap kat bini org...

maybe dia igt si balqis masih tak baper ngan danial cam masa awal2 dolu...

maybe dia igt balqis nak gi mozambique sbb nak lari dari danial...

alaa... cinta tuh buta beb...

btw... yg si danial nih pun... lek laaa bro...

ko dulu boleh tersuka kat balqis sbb eventhough ko tonggang ke, usung pompuan lain ke, cik kak tuh boleh relek jer... sabo je ngan ko...

nih baru balqis baru dpt surat... surat je baru... dah cabut...

xkan lupa bini ko tuh lawa beb...

sekian ulasan dr aku...
alzun
April 29, 2005   01:37 PM PDT
 
sabor..sabor korang semua....Danial xder apa-apa nya..
bkn merajuk...sekadar terkejut siamang jerr tuuhh!

yerlaa...hati danial dah laa sendu sbb nak ditinggalkan balqis..terbacalak surat hamzah tuh..lagilah dahsyat perasaan dia...

hehehe...cobaaaaan ..


dueng-mangifera
April 29, 2005   10:07 AM PDT
 
kesian danial and balqis...hidup manusia yang bahagia camtu la yang banyak rosak oleh sebab manusia macam hamzah. even danial pernah buat salah, tp itu bukan alasan utk hamzah masuk campur...dunia balqis dan danial adalah dunia suami isteri dimana mereka dijadikan utk saling memaafkan kesalahan masing2....

ah...danial bukanlah merajuk sgt tp sebenarnya terkejut, atau lebih tepat lagi tercabar...danial tu nampak cam panas baran jgk so dia maybe takut dia akan terpukul balqis lagi even dia tahu tu bukan salah balqis (balqis hanya bersalah kerana dia cute dan ke-cute-an dia tu memikat hamzah...bukan dia yang pikat hamzah tp kecomelan balqis tu yang memikat hamzah). so, i think danial take good preventive action here...sebagai lelaki, selain marah, dia jgk terasa tercabar....so, better dia deal sensorang jer perasaan dia tu.

manusia cam hamzah tu lah yang buat byk isteri yang setia jadi curang.....kerjanya asyik nak rosakkan rumah tangga orang jer....kureng asam nyer jantan.

(ops...ter emo la plak. hehehe. but that's what i think)....

alahai...kesiannya danial dan balqis....
pembaca
April 29, 2005   09:34 AM PDT
 
eeeeeee i hate people like hamzah.pengacau tul.dah tau bini org jgn le berangan lebih2.
dhiya
April 29, 2005   08:40 AM PDT
 
grr.. geramnya dgn hamzah! dah tau she can't be yours, buat apa terhegeh2 lagi... waiting for a miracle agaknya!

hoping for something is okay, but for someone that can't be yours... that's wrong!

nak join jaja bagi pelempang jepun kat hamzah leh tak? heheheh...
pinkJambu
April 29, 2005   01:20 AM PDT
 
satu hari nih akak dah abiskan SESUCI CINTA , best bangetttt

gud job!
jaja
April 29, 2005   01:17 AM PDT
 
ngek nyer hamzah...ni yg terasa nak wat pelempang jepon nih iii marahnyer saya
ieja
April 29, 2005   12:21 AM PDT
 
i hate hamzah!!!
don't think it's danial fault..maybe he needs something more straightforward..
or maybe he needs balqis to say it herself ;)
may the beats of their hearts lead them to each other :p
Nur
April 28, 2005   11:51 PM PDT
 
aduh!!! salah paham di saat akhir eh?cepat sangat Danial merajuk.. :(
honeyza
April 28, 2005   10:23 PM PDT
 
wut a surprise?huhu..nearly tears dropping!haha..so touching but yet still romantic..haha
 

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